Comments on: Honesty. (updated) http://isaacdowning.com/2007/03/10/honesty/ confessions, conjectures & coffee. Wed, 07 Jan 2009 04:20:28 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7 hourly 1 By: Lance http://isaacdowning.com/2007/03/10/honesty/comment-page-1/#comment-116 Lance Fri, 23 Mar 2007 01:00:06 +0000 http://isaacdowning.com/?p=183#comment-116 No problem, brother. I think it looks great! No problem, brother. I think it looks great!

]]> By: Lance http://isaacdowning.com/2007/03/10/honesty/comment-page-1/#comment-105 Lance Sun, 11 Mar 2007 04:44:16 +0000 http://isaacdowning.com/?p=183#comment-105 I like how you've carried the "sun rays" element from the back to the front. And I really like the front's design, in general ... it mixes many layers well and really leverages the yellow to symbolize the hope. I'd say that the back looks cramped. If it were me, I would take out "Join the celebration this Easter Sunday" (it's redundant), move the address up under the map, and put the rest of the text in one text box to simplify it (though that's not necessary). I'd also take off the rounded corners (or take away the text boxes altogether) to jive with the front's "straight line" design and try to space it out a little more evenly (more margin inside, even margin outside). Looks good, man! I like how you’ve carried the “sun rays” element from the back to the front. And I really like the front’s design, in general … it mixes many layers well and really leverages the yellow to symbolize the hope.

I’d say that the back looks cramped. If it were me, I would take out “Join the celebration this Easter Sunday” (it’s redundant), move the address up under the map, and put the rest of the text in one text box to simplify it (though that’s not necessary). I’d also take off the rounded corners (or take away the text boxes altogether) to jive with the front’s “straight line” design and try to space it out a little more evenly (more margin inside, even margin outside).

Looks good, man!

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